He sees
your defects;
Sees through
your corny act.
You phony.
He sees
the lies.
You liar.
He's been there,
seen that;
seen those imperfections.
You are flawed.
He knows
all
too
well.
Bitter, bleak
and blind
when he evaluates
himself.
His world
is false;
a fake;
a fraud.
My favorite stanza is
ReplyDeleteBitter, bleak
and blind
when he evaluates
himself.
Beautifully tone, and excellent use of the poetic devices studied!
I like your use of alliteration, and short line breaks which make your writing sound very poetic.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! :)